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Post by Dots on Sept 21, 2008 12:21:21 GMT 7
Hi everybody!!! I know i create lots of threads recently but this thread i create now is just for everybody to support my story on Michelle ye fanfiction and give some feedbacks from authors that have more experience than I do so i can improve on my stories. hehe!!! Thanx for your support!!!! ;D
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Post by Baby-G on Sept 21, 2008 17:14:29 GMT 7
Hehes good luck then! You posted this on MFR? Supporting you always!! JYJY!
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Post by Katniss on Sept 21, 2008 20:19:50 GMT 7
I read the first chapter you wrote. It's a good start. I think it's very creative. Just try to make your chapters a bit longer. But it looks like you did a good job laying the foundation of the story.
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Post by Dots on Sept 22, 2008 6:09:01 GMT 7
LOL! Thanx fir ur comments. Thats what i think too. Ill try to make my chapter longer for the 2nd chapter!!
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Post by Dots on Sept 24, 2008 6:05:43 GMT 7
now i kinda regret making Tavia the baddie coz i actually like her in MR. o well. after i finish the story, i might do a apology........ wat do u guyz think? PS ive uploaded my 2nd chapter but its a little weird. I mean there isnt much going on. o yeah!forgot to ask. You know the fiction realm....can i maybe download a song like at the end of the story??
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Post by MYR Admin on Sept 24, 2008 18:24:46 GMT 7
Do u mean to UPload a song instead? Well nope, the site cant hold too much media files or it will be slow... hehe
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Post by Dots on Sept 25, 2008 6:24:31 GMT 7
I mean like at the end, the story ends with a song.
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Post by Dots on Oct 3, 2008 17:06:04 GMT 7
YAY!IVE DONE 4 CHAPTERS NOW!LOL! Well IVE CHANGED THE RM MEET. THERE MEET I WAS PLANNING WAS LAME SO I CHANGED IT!HEHE! They will mee in chapter 5!LOL! Is anyone reading my fanfic? ANY COMMENTS........ Hope for your support always!
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Post by Baby-G on Oct 5, 2008 1:47:50 GMT 7
Hey, I'm still reading it(: Jyjy!
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Post by MYR Admin on Oct 5, 2008 8:54:04 GMT 7
I just read it Well I'll always catch up whenever I find time to, so keep up
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Post by Dots on Nov 1, 2008 12:30:56 GMT 7
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